Write that essay feedback Screen time

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 This is my feedback that I got for my lawyer paragraph that we did we are learning to do these lawyer paragraphs and it is really fun This one is called screen time I am really happy with the outcome and since we collected the data first It really helped.




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  1. Anonymous15 June 2021 at 11:43

    Hi

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  2. Anonymous15 June 2021 at 11:47

    I go to campion I get bulled by a group of boys my name is jamie

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  3. Anonymous15 June 2021 at 11:49

    didn't you used to go to campion i recognised your name

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  4. Anonymous18 June 2021 at 09:10

    hi yeah i did how did you know ?

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