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wte sentence types

In lh 7 we did how many wte sentence types we could do and after a little while I got all 12 sentence types.




wte daily challenge

 In class we did the daily challenge on write that essay, I learnt a lot of new sentence types. and this is what i scored.







My learning goals and reflection

Something new I learnt last week was to ride magic all by myself without a lead rope.

Learning that I struggled with finding a good conclusion to use on my speech.

How I managed myself I feel i managed well around others.

How I managed my learning I managed my learning well and got 100% on the tracker.

What is my goal for this week to be a better learner/self manager my goal is to get 100% or over on the tracker each week and complete all my work.

wte modules

 today on modules i did the sentence as a train and how to use a comma.



wte modules

 Today i did to modules on wte i did w start and the red white and blue sentence.











write that essay modules

 These are the two modules that i did the power sentence and the simple sentence








 My learning reflection form last week


Last week i learnt that i need to keep pushing myself to my personal best and work harder. 

I struggled with thinking of an idea for my speech.

I managed myself well and used all the rise values at cross country.

I managed my learning well and got over 100% on the tracking sheet.


My learning goal for this week.


My learning goal for this week is to push myself harder and work harder until i produce the most quality work i can.


QR code creator

 Today we learnt how to make a QR code i made mine on my book that i made on book creator and my gamefroot game and my best piece of writing. A Qor code is a little box with line and dots and it takes you to different websites. you might find a Qr code in shops and they take you to websites the shop has or uses.


this is my gamefroot game code 






this is my best piece of writing.





And this is my Book creator Code 



Poems

 


This a poem I did on this picture our teachers in the hub put up two different pictures I chose to write about this on It was really helpful to have this picture showing you could think of so many ideas and incorporate them into your writing.


Magical World


I could hear the river gently lapping against the riverbank

And the trees dancing in the wind, I could hear people laughing as they played in the

river splashing around.I heard a crash ! as a pan hit the floor this world was magic my face

was pressed

up against the window making white

magic like mist I could see kids jumping up and down like monkeys jumping for bananas

the different colours of the buildings were reflecting onto the river.

The buildings were as still as a statue but the river flowed ever so calmly.

This was magic sparkling magic I did not want it to ever end as the day grew on

magic was more alive than ever the sun set with orange and red sky the sun hiding

behind the fluffy candy floss blanket drifting off to sleep as the moon rose no creature

did sture as the magic came alive.


By Matilda year 6

Poems

In the hub we have been writing poems and we got to write them about having a connection to something

I wrote mine about fish which is my star sign and if we could we got to make them rhyme being able to create these poems were great for me i got to express myself in making this poem and putting all my ideas to make this awesome piece. 

 


Pieces ( fish)

Beautiful colours all around I hear a voice, I hear a sound Splashing about in the colourful waves fishes of all colours come to play on this beautiful sunny day fishies swarm around me in blue , all these colours blinding me along with you.


Green coral swaying in the waves and little red crabs coming to play twisting and twirling and bobbing up and down big silver fishes, small yellow fishes all kinds of fishes swimming around twirling their tails feeling the grove the disco fish party came to town with all sorts of crowds coming around the fishes danced and waved to the end of the day, stopping the music, stopping the band the sunrise came above in the the sky it was time to say goodbye saying your prayers to the waves and fish for now it’s time to say goodbye.


 By Matilda Shann Year 6 Makauri School



At Makauri school we made letters about a problem my problem was playground equipment ( Jungle Gym ) and we used a app called tinker cad to make a model of what we were going to do my picture is down the bottom and I did a letter to our school groundsmen I hope you enjoy reading my letter and seeing my picture.

Makauri school

120 king rd 

Hexton

Ph (06)8675779


Dear Mr Hall


I am writing to you because at Makauri School in the playground we have a problem with our jungle gym and are wondering whether you would mind taking some time out of your day to come and help us?


In class we did something called Crazy 8’s ideas, some crazy, some great and then we went to the hall and got to vote 2 times on 2 different ideas from different peoples solutions or the same groups.


We as students in the jungle gym group have come up with an idea to concrete the polls in the ground for they have been coming out with a certain amount of weight so we were hoping you could help us and give us some good advice.


Why should you help us? You might think ‘well you should help us make a safer jungle gym for students at Makauri School’. It would be a huge help doing this it means making one small step closer to making one thing in our playground safer.


We are 100% sure you can help us. We know you are good at this sort of thing and we would love it if you could give us some great advice on making the jungle gym safer for students to play on.


Hopefully you can help us make this problem become solved so please consider helping us. We would really appreciate it.




 

confidence- what it is and what it is not

 Today in the hub at Makauri school  have been foucasing on what confidence is and what it is no we looked at a video of bobby and brain and then we got into groups of three to have a desiccation and write down on a peaice of paper what confidence is and what it is not.

To me confidence is : standing up for yourself,standing up for a friend, having good selfastem , being yourself,using your voice (talking in front of crowds), taking risks, believing in yourself,coming out of your comfort zone and not being afraid to make new friends. 


To me confidence is not Is being a bystander,trying to be someone else not you,being afraid to use your voice,being afraid to take a risk,being afraid to ask for help and being afraid to make a new friend.






lockdown dairy

this is a link to my lockdown dairy and is about what it is like being in lockdown


lockdown

are we for or against our own Makauri school pest control

Are we for or against pest control
In Makauri school we have a group of students have started a pest control to lower the number of pests at our school.

I think we should have a pest control because we are saving the native birds from extinction and we are helping our environment we should also have  pest control because pests spread virus and bacteria and by killing the pests they can spread virus around.

These are some reasons why we should have a pest control at school at makauri school.
1)  the pest control saves the native birds.
2) because we are helping the environment from diseases from the pests.

Facts 
A24 This trap is used to kill rat ́s, mice and some hedgehogs.
Doc 200 kills ratś mice stoats weasels ferrets and maybe some hedgehogs.

I have known told you about why we should have a pest control at makauri school but before i finish here is one more reason that we should have a  pest control we think keeping the native birds alive is important the birds are harmless and are beautiful

About Me 2019

This is my slide deck that shows a little bit about me. It shows my favorite food animal and a picture of me.  All my images are appropriate  on my slide deck.

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