Poems

 


This a poem I did on this picture our teachers in the hub put up two different pictures I chose to write about this on It was really helpful to have this picture showing you could think of so many ideas and incorporate them into your writing.


Magical World


I could hear the river gently lapping against the riverbank

And the trees dancing in the wind, I could hear people laughing as they played in the

river splashing around.I heard a crash ! as a pan hit the floor this world was magic my face

was pressed

up against the window making white

magic like mist I could see kids jumping up and down like monkeys jumping for bananas

the different colours of the buildings were reflecting onto the river.

The buildings were as still as a statue but the river flowed ever so calmly.

This was magic sparkling magic I did not want it to ever end as the day grew on

magic was more alive than ever the sun set with orange and red sky the sun hiding

behind the fluffy candy floss blanket drifting off to sleep as the moon rose no creature

did sture as the magic came alive.


By Matilda year 6

Comments

  1. WOW! Matilda I really liked that poem it was really interesting.

    fluffy candy floss that really made the poem pop.

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